Shamelessly stolen from a_phoenixdragon

[varkelton]

This one sounds amusing...

Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know.

Current Fandoms: SPN, Dark Angel

Comments

[gidgetgal9.livejournal.com]

Interesting... huh let's see.

Title of fic- The Long And Crazy Road...

This story was a disturbing but amazing look at Sam's loss of sanity after his trip to hell. I love how you captured the boy's new chapter in their lives and how even with everything that had been thrown at them, their still the two brothers we fell in love with in season one.
Great job! :)

[a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com]

Starting Over All Over Again

Sam losing Jessica to the fire as a known heartbreak - but to push his brother away and cut off all ties to his family was what really brought me to my knees. His total denial of his feelings for his brother, his driven need to be different than his freaky family - and still being plagued with visions of torment and death? Wow...and that final vision causing him to drop it all and search for his brother before he died at the hands of the YED - that clinched it! I was freaking HOOKED! The betrayals, the lies, the steamy sex scenes were just the icing! I really liked the way you had Dean finding relief in his brother's rejection in the arms of those who would hurt him (and that clever way of the YED finding him through his trysts - that was SWEET). But the ending, while bittersweet, was worth it all in the end. Sam declaring his love for his brother like that? I just...you had me in TEARS, lovie!! This was perfection!

*Squishes you*

[rivestra.livejournal.com]

Clipped and Bound has to be one of my all time favorite reads!

I love how when Sam learns Castiel has been cast out for stealing Dean from hell, he gets righteously pissed off and mounts a bloody, vengeful rescue of the angel from the demons' vile slave market. Even more, I love how utterly lost the boy is when, as he nurses Castiel back to health, he realizes they're now tied together and tries to deal with his own body's traitorous reaction to the dark demands of psychic of ownership...

[locknkey.livejournal.com]

Okay - 'cause I need a BB break.

Paths Less Traveled

I loved the way you delved into Dean's PTSD after Hell using Sam's psychic abilities. The slow build until Sam figured out each and every one of Dean's dirty little secrets, including his less than pure thoughts about Sam. I cried - copious tears - when Dean left, feeling exposed and rejected becasue of their typical Winchester non-communication. The way you brought them back together and made them find a way to relate to each other and struggle for their HEA was beleivable and powerful. Most of all your descriptions of Dean's mental torment and nightmare's and Sam navigating them all, left me breathless.

hee!