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This one sounds amusing...
Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know.
Current Fandoms: SPN, Dark Angel
Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know.
Current Fandoms: SPN, Dark Angel
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Sam losing Jessica to the fire as a known heartbreak - but to push his brother away and cut off all ties to his family was what really brought me to my knees. His total denial of his feelings for his brother, his driven need to be different than his freaky family - and still being plagued with visions of torment and death? Wow...and that final vision causing him to drop it all and search for his brother before he died at the hands of the YED - that clinched it! I was freaking HOOKED! The betrayals, the lies, the steamy sex scenes were just the icing! I really liked the way you had Dean finding relief in his brother's rejection in the arms of those who would hurt him (and that clever way of the YED finding him through his trysts - that was SWEET). But the ending, while bittersweet, was worth it all in the end. Sam declaring his love for his brother like that? I just...you had me in TEARS, lovie!! This was perfection!
*Squishes you*
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Dean reached out a hand and gripped Sam's shoulder, pulling him into a full body embrace. Sam shuddered against Dean, clinging too him, willing Dean to tell him it was all a strange vision that was anything but true, but Dean only held him close, holding a silent vigil against Sam's pain. Jess had always been so vibrant, so alive, and now all Sam could see was her body pinned to the ceiling, horror and pain twisting her beautiful features into something he couldn't recognize, flame so hot it burned his eyes enveloping her.
He moved closer to Dean, and suddenly that sick need he'd almost forgotten flashed through him, making him flush with heady desire. He shoved Dean away. "You did this!" he shouted. "Fuck! If you'd never come back here, this never would have happened!"
Dean went still with shock for a moment, opened his mouth to speak and then shut it again almost as fast. Fierce hurt made his skin turn sallow in the dim light, as he looked at Sam hopelessly. "I'm sorry, Sammy," he whispered. "This was the last thing I wanted to happen."
I'm so glad you liked this one sweetie! Although with all the hurt!Dean I was able to include, I'm not really surprised, lol! I think my favorite scene was when Sam stormed in and yanked the Demon off of Dean, slamming that cookie cutter shaped like a devils trap that he'd had made so that it cut the pattern into the demon's skin. Good times, my love!!!
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*Needs a towel*
BTW - icon is shareable! I need some Bottom!Dean icons, dammit!! *Whimpers*
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Feel free to shamelessly enable me, darling... ♥
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*Whimpers*
*Clutches*
Enable?! I DEMAND you write this!! I wants it nooowww!!
*Cracks whip*
*Snogs you shamelessly*