Second Beta Needed

Hello my loves! So, the trouble with having one of your closest and oldest friends as your primary beta, is that even though they love you dearly, and they are fabulously talented and generous, they don't always share your kinks or reading preferences. So, I believe I have successfully squicked my beta, and even though she's a champ and soldiering on through with the grammar part anyway, she has little to offer in terms of flow. So, for those that actually love horror stories and don't mind GEN fic (I know, I know - I wrote gen, WTF???):

This story is based on rivestra's story - Steel on Shadow
( Details below the cut so that readers who aren't interested don't have to get spoiled for the fic... )