I'm not sure why anyone would be mad at your ending but I loved the twist and I was on the edge of my seat.
I also felt like your writing style had grown in this story too. I loved your previous long story but this one felt tighter and the imagery was more evocative.
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Date: 2009-11-27 10:43 pm (UTC)I also felt like your writing style had grown in this story too. I loved your previous long story but this one felt tighter and the imagery was more evocative.